Now that I have stuff (lots!) to read to people, I have begun to do so. If I call you or ask you to listen to a chapter, be polite, grab a soda, and just listen. It is amazing what I find, and even more amazing the comments--so far each one has been spot on, and something I suspected myself. The next draft will be much better, I can already tell. I am guessing 4 drafts in all--or more.